Tuesday, October 26, 2010

Online Editing Makes The News Newsy

The headline on the electronic version of the Journal Sentinel's solid disclosure story about Scott Walker and County government letting the mental health complex lapse into chaos has been upgraded with newsier, informative wording:

"Audit finds violent events grew in last five years at mental health facility"

Initially, the headline online, and in the print edition was the reader-killing "Mental facility audited."

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